Great stuff. The atmosphere was perfect. Don’t know how this will work as a series, but I eagerly await the expansion to the premise.
Great stuff. The atmosphere was perfect. Don’t know how this will work as a series, but I eagerly await the expansion to the premise.
So the B plot with the professor ended up going nowhere. And you were lacking a climax for your main plot.
The conversations are too drawn out and I would prefer less banter overall.
sorry lol
I'm super boooored!
Joined on 7/18/20